My Family
My family is Samoan
I am a warrior
My ancestors came from Samoa
I am proud of my ancestors
They help me to be special
They teach me to help others
I believe god because I am a warrior
My ancestors guide me through
My family are warriors
5 comments:
Hi Tasi Junior I like the way you used different colors to do your writing but you need to try and remember to fill in your full stops. Your poem really inspired me to believe and your ancestors will be so proud of you.
Hello Tasi Junior,I liked the way you picked this cool picture because he is really cool.I also like the way you are describing your family as warriors and you are showing others that you are proud of them.
Thanks bruce but there is suppost to be no fullstops in poems and thank you tiere.
Hi Tasi Junior, I like the way you said that your family are warriors you need more information about your ancestors and I like the that you said that you are proud of your ancestors.
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